Volume 21 Number 1

Coming in December. Advanced orders start in mid-November on Amazon.

Oct – December 2017

Managing Editor: B. Lynn Goodwin

Webmaster: Paul Goulart

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If you are enrolled in any creative writing or MFA program or are a creative writing blogger and would like to be an intern for Writer Advice, please e-mail Lgood67334@comcast.net.

Twenty years ago, Writer Advice started as an e-mail newsletter with a mailing list of thirty-five people gathered from a defunct site called Haven’s List. That was then.

Today I am excited to announce that my third book, a memoir called Never Too Late: From Wannabe to Wife at 62 (Koehler Press), will be available for pre-release orders on Amazon in early November and will launch on December 15, 2017.

NOTE: I will be sending reminders when it is available. Please forward them to your friends, peers, and contacts that might be interested.

Interested in reading and reviewing it? Please e-mail me at Lgood67334@comcast.net.

Starts Contest

Our next contest, Scintillating Starts Contest is already open. It will end December 1. This year’s judges are last year’s winners, Frank S. Joseph, Susan Keller, and Deborah Stauton.

You can read their work at here.

We are seeking your Scintillating Starts for any unpublished prose book. Fiction, memoir, creative non fiction, and any other prose genres are welcome.


  • Grab and hold your reader.
  • Keep us reading.
  • Set high stakes.
  • Share openings that matter.
  • FAQs:

    Q: How much can we send?

    A: We prefer submissions to be no longer than 1000 words. If you send more, we do not promise to read beyond the first 1000 words.

    Q: I haven’t finished my book. Can I still submit my opening.

    A: Sure. This is for works in progress as well as manuscripts seeking a publisher.

    Q: Can you tell me how to improve my submission?

    A: As always we will send you an evaluation of your writing. If you want to resubmit, you have to go through Submittable again, so there will be a second fee.

    DEADLINE: December 1, 2017.

    PRIZE: The prize, $300, will be split among the winners.


    1. Include your name, contact information, and the title of the piece in your cover letter only.

    2. Since we judge you anonymously, leave your name off the piece you submit, but please include the title.

    3. Please double-space. If you forget, we’ll do it for you.

    4. We recommend you use 14-point, but if you forget, we will adjust it for you.

    5. Cambria, Times New Roman, and Ariel are the easiest fonts to read.

    6. You own the copyright. If we publish it, the rights still belong to you—not us.

    7. Simultaneous submissions accepted.

    8. Please do not submit the opening of something that has already been traditionally or independently published.

    PLEASE submit all entries through Submittable. The page will open on October 1. The fee is $16.50.


    The fee, which covers our evaluation as well as contributing to the prize, is $16.50.

    You may enter up to 3 openings but each must be a separate submission with a separate fee.

    Names of all winners will be announced in the winter issue (Jan-Mar, 2018) of Writer Advice.

    Questions, but not submissions, go to Lgood67334 AT comcast DOT net. We look forward to reading your work.

    Thank you for your help. You are the first professional to look at my work. You have advanced my learning curve "leaps and bounds." ~~Frank Califano

    “Thanks for your encouraging words. I think I'll write another story!” ~~Laura Fischer

    “I am thrilled with your in depth response and excellent feedback.” ~~David Flower

    “You have no idea how much it means to get positive feedback. To have a professional like yourself say that I write well is amazing.” ~~Jason Barton

    “You are an astute observer.” ~~Karen Petley

    “It takes both time and effort to read a piece and respond so thoughtfully- I appreciate it greatly.” ~~Parvi Ramchandani

    “Thank you for your kind and constructive response.” ~~Barbara Ryan

    You have a wonderful way of making a writer feel that, despite its flaws, her story is still worthwhile. Not every editor has that quality. ~~Peggy Toney Horton

    As this was one of the first writing contests I decided to submit to, this feedback definitely inspires me to keep working on some of my other projects. ~~Kayleigh Clark

"I never even took any classes until I was quite far along with writing – I wish I had!”
Eva Woods

An Interview with Eva Woods, Author of SOMETHING LIKE HAPPY 

By B. Lynn Goodwin

Our Emotions Fluctuate


Did you ever try #100 Days of Happiness, which swept through Facebook not long ago? Is it possible or is it pie-in-the-sky? Eva Woods, the author of Something Like Happy first thought of this novel because of that Facebook challenge. The result is a story that will embrace you, just as one of the characters, Polly, embraces life to the best of her ability.

Annie Hebden hates her job, her past, her present, and the terrible loss that made everything spiral downhill. Colorfully, bubbly Polly breaks up the black cloud Annie carries around, because she knows time is too short to waste even a day. So she challenges Annie to 100 Days of Happiness, Surprise, and Participation in Life. No one says no to Polly, except for one. (Spoiler alert; I may have overstepped my boundaries.)

Something Like Happy is the premiere publication of Graydon House Books, an imprint of Harlequin. Note: This is not a Harlequin romance. The company is expanding to meet the needs of a changing market and the ever-evolving 
world of publishing.

Eva Woods’ writing will fill you with joy, amazement, and perspective as she takes you on a whirlwind celebration of life. Here she talks about her unique process, publishing today, and much more. Let her ideas inspire you.

BLG: Tell us about your background. How did you become interested in writing and how did you develop your skills? 

EW: I’ve always wanted to be a writer, ever since I was a geeky kid living in an Irish village and reading everything I could get from the library. However, I didn’t think this was a job people actually did, so I spent my 20s writing in secret and not finishing or sending anything out, before I finally realized I had to just go for it and try to finish a book. I never even took any classes until I was quite far along with writing – I wish I had!

BLG: Did Something Like Happy start with Polly, Annie, cancer, Alzheimer’s, a combination or something else? How did it grow into material for a novel?

EW: It initially grew out of the #100HappyDays challenge, and I started to wonder how that would apply if you weren’t a happy, positive person — or if, in fact, you’d had a lot of terrible things happen to you and hated the whole idea of it. Once I hit on the 100 chapters/100 days structure, it all came together nicely.

BLG: Your characters are wonderfully three-dimensional. Any tips for letting readers inside the heads of characters dealing with emotional situations? 

EW: Thank you! One good tip I came across recently was that people don’t always react the way you might think, for example screaming with fear or crying with sadness. We often bury our emotions or feel something that might seem inappropriate while we’re in the middle of difficult situations. Sometimes you just get your head down and try to survive it, and you only feel sad later. Also, no one is happy or sad all the time. Our emotions fluctuate.

BLG: Your voice is so strong. How did you develop your effective and engaging voice? 

EW: I love writing “in voice,” although that’s usually easier in the first person, which this book isn’t. I try to think of what words and references the character would use, not just when speaking but also when thinking, and I also like to use a lot of direct thoughts and internal monologue to get close to them.

BLG: What would you, Eva Woods, do if you only had 100 days to live?

EW: I would have to travel a lot – I have a long list of places I still want to go. And I would definitely stop trying to eat healthily and just have a lot of cake, as Polly does in the book.

BLG: What is the best piece of writing advice you ever got from an editor? 

EW: My agent is a great editor and she’s helped me realize I often make the same point too many times – that I can trust the reader to get what I’m saying the first time, even if it is quite subtle. This also makes the book pacier!

BLG: How has the publishing world changed since your first book came out?

EW: It was only five years ago, but things have changed a lot! There’s much more emphasis on ebooks, hardbacks have almost disappeared, book launches are becoming scarcer, and advances are down for many experienced authors, while first-time writers are sometimes getting enormous payouts. I think the industry hasn’t quite got to grips with digital yet, but I’m hopeful that we will.

BLG: What are you working on now?  

EW: I’m always working on several things. I’ve finished the follow-up to Something Like Happy and am trying to work out what the book after that will be. I know the basic idea but once again it’s going to have an unusual structure, so I need to figure that out!

BLG: I like the way you keep going and the ideas keep flowing. Thank you for all that you shared in this interview. I’m happy to have you share any or all of it on your webpage, and of course I’d be delighted if you link it to Writer Advice, www.writeradvice.com.

Life is a combination of joy, sadness, humdrum, tension, right, wrong, and much more. Sometimes you need to focus or reset, and Something Like Happy will help you do this. Take a break, observe these characters, and sit back and enjoy the ride.